John provided me with plenty of points to take into consideration, mainly in regard to the organization of the narrative. He was very professional in pointing out the parts of my book that weren’t working, and I was grateful for the feedback on what was effective, since it eventually led to a publishing deal. John is exceptionally knowledgeable, yet gentle with his criticism. I can confidently recommend his services.

Evelyn Bookless is the creator of the book “Captain Green and the Plastic Scene”.

It was an absolute pleasure to have John as an editor for the first draft of my manuscript. His expertise, communication skills, and advice provided me with guidance and were instrumental in improving my manuscript. I’m thrilled to report that my children’s book is now available in stores across the country and gaining global recognition.

Brintha J. Gardner is the writer of the book “The Amazing Adventures of Little Right Sock”.

John Fox gave me such kind and encouraging feedback, which was truly appreciated. He also shared his knowledge on the various approaches used in poetry, which was very beneficial. I will certainly come back to him for help with editing my next book.

John Fox is a passionate storyteller who possesses a strong grasp of fundamental concepts and a creative vision that can elevate any writer’s craft. When you collaborate with him, you get the benefit of his years of experience and his commitment to the craft of writing. He is truly a remarkable talent.

John Fox is a real gem when it comes to writing services. He is highly skilled, efficient and reliable. His insight was invaluable and I was really pleased with the speediness of his response. It’s no wonder that his book, “So Many Rules”, was so successful, topping the charts at #2 on the Amazon New Releases in Children’s Values Books. Truly, I cannot thank John Fox enough for his help.

“Binky The Mermaid: The Fin-Tastic Race was the first book I’ve ever written. John Fox was so easy to work with and was very responsive. He helped me condense my book without losing the story and even gave me advice on the next steps. I could not have done this without John’s help. I am in the process of working on another book and I will use no other editor but John.”

– Kamiesha Anderson-Wieder, author of “Binky the Mermaid”

“I recently got my children’s book manuscript edited by John Fox. I was very happy with the fast communication I received from him. John provided great feedback, made great changes, and also answered all my questions. I have recommended John to a few of my friends and will continue to do so. Thank you again John for making me feel confident in my manuscript.”

– Jaz Tut

“John was extremely helpful and very honest. All of his thoughtful comments made total sense. Will definitely use him again.”

– Karen Sherwood

“John provides just the right combination of encouragement and solid feedback that can greatly improve a piece of fiction. What I particularly like about John’s approach is his ability to understand where a writer is developmentally and speak to him or her on that level. As a teacher, he is totally approachable, clear in the points he makes and very enthusiastic.”

– Maisie Wheeler

“As an unpublished author, I wasn’t at all sure about using John’s editing service. I am very glad that I did! His edits and suggestions for my children’s story were excellent. One of the main differences was the ‘voice’ of the story. His suggestions made the ‘voice’ more clear. That is important in any story, but I think especially for children.

– Irene Walsh

“I can’t say enough about John Fox! I’ve discovered that writing a children’s book is quite different than what I’m used to, and John supplied me with information I didn’t even know to look for. His commentary was extremely thorough and eye-opening, and the time he spent analyzing my manuscript is obvious. Not only did I receive an amazing critique, but the way he explained what I was missing was educational. It’s invaluable information I can use again and again! If anyone is shopping for an editor for their children’s book, John is, hands down, my recommendation.”

– Sarah Flores

“I appreciate the detailed attention John gave my children’s book. Based on his thoughtful comments, I can tell he didn’t just gloss over it but read it thoroughly. He caught a number of inconsistencies that both I and my co-writer missed and made some very helpful suggestions for improving the work. My only regret is that I didn’t contact him sooner.”

– Nancy Bucca